| hello! I'm studying English now. Can you help me look-over the following paragraph to see whether them are flowing. Thanks! Write Forestall The Red Mountain—— The Origin Life If we assimilate the five thousand years’ civilization of china to a letter, the 60 hundred million years’ geological history of the earth can spread as a great magnum opus of 1.2 million words. At present, the Himalayas is still rising. In the latter two thousand years, the tumulus groups in Xi’an were covered 1mm loess annually at average. The nature's uncanny workmanship keeps on operating. The young life blend with the aged. The life gestated in the primordial ocean, thereafter, as the alga that rush to the coast and during the period of acclimatize them to the life of land, they evolved to naked ferny plant. Then the life started to lie over the earth. After the plants, the animals debarked. The animals evolved from fish to the amphibian animal, from the amphibian animal to reptile, then the reptile divide into the bird and the mammal. 20th, Nov, 2007 To be continued |
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